Saturday, April 5, 2008

Waka

Locker room real,
Warriors with you real,
Grit, tough, all real.

Explanation: I am trying to say that some stuff you learn in life isn't important(real), but teammates and teamwork is important. That trying your hardest is important. That being somewhere where you don't want to be is important. These are life lessons.

2 comments:

jamie pennock said...

its a good poem but i see it more as the mindset someone is in before something big. like you siddenly figure out this is all real and you have to get your head in the game i dont see how importance comes across

maybe make a reference to something that isnt real for effect

DBaum said...

no thanks jamie.
but nice thinking.
Baum